Tuesday, February 15, 2011

Musings




When  love is seldom found
Considered petty, possibly,to the one that is faked.
And feel bruised, like the mongrel with its tail tuck 'tween.
"Look , fool you are"!

But life must move on….!
To be denied over again.
What fool you are, to be trodden over and again!

8 comments:

Arun Meethale Chirakkal said...

I’m confused. In fact, the first stanza contradicts the second or vice versa, that’s what I feel. Is it that one should never lose hope…?
Is it Van Gogh’s Self Portrait?

Sh@s said...

Poignant lines.
Keep writing :)

NRIGirl said...

Hi! Glad to visit finally. I have read your comments elsewhere on Doc's blog and also on Balachandran V.

Honestly I couldn't understand the meaning of the poem here. Would you care to explain in detail?

anilkurup said...

@ Arun

@ NRIGirl

Honestly I like comments that dose not gulp a Post.A difference of opinion or logical opposite is something I love. And being a rookie at penning verses I appreciate the posers you made.

I tried to mention in the first stanza the waste of love when it is seldom noticed and is trivialized for the one that is false. And again I mentioned that it being more often the rule of life , life has to move on and the protagonist stays a fool .

anilkurup said...

@ Sh@s

Thanks for the visit and comment

sm said...

nice poem
yes life moves on

anilkurup said...

@ sm

Thanks for the comment

adithyasaravana said...

what fool you are.. to be trodden over and again..Hmmm
all is fair in love..